Hello my fellow students,

I have hereby attached a complete copy of my second draft regarding the multimodal project that I am handling. It is a word document named Case Study Report. Kindly, evaluate and provide me with feedback. I am trying to develop my project to elaborate and explain how humanization of pets affect operations of pet food companies. Precisely, I am examining how pet humanization influences Blue Buffalo’s operating strategies and financial developments.

I have modified this second draft based on the guidelines and pieces of advice that I received from our professor. I think this report needs to be improved to vividly elaborate on the effects of pet humanization in the pet food industry. I have tried modifying and proofreading my report, and I find a significant difference between my first and second drafts, but I believe there is room for improvement. Can you point to areas that require further modification to ensure smooth flow of the paper? Is my thesis suitable for the document or it needs some improvements? Kindly advise on how I can adjust the overall organization of my report to ensure the proper and exciting presentation of the information. I will greatly appreciate your contributions.

Thank you.